if love was.............................................. ,
Love is simply a feeling the most beautiful feeling a human being can feel
poem is very good
rimu
thanx yash
being a poet urself u can understand a reader's enjoyment is a poet's delight
thanx again
Pyar ke do hi anjaam hai, deedar ya intezaar, jyadatar ke hisse mein intezaar hi aata hai, bahot achhi tarah se bhaavon ko shabadon mein dhaala hai aap ne, ek achhi aur sunder kavita ![]()
rimu
Thank you Namita,
this is the truth that life has two faces and one is the reason of importance of other
thanx again
rimu
Dear R K
thanx for your comments, you have very rightly said that Pains and pleasures are a part of life and every body must go though it in order to enjoy life to the full. I believe each of them be it pain or pleasure leaves a person with more experience if a person understands otherwise he is left with one more reason to complain and curse his luck you may find it funny but to some persons even pleasure gives a reason to complain becoz when it goes the complaint is why did it come when it had to go. So what i believe is Life is a game to be played by braveheart who likes to take the bull by horns and with his ability to counter every problem with his skills he emerges with a solution every time and people say he is lucky. For weak hearted people Life has always been and will always be a Problem.
the most apt presentation of a mother's immotions i have read so far, i congratulate you on writing such a superb poem, might be you yourself are a very sensative person who can feel such deep feelings and a good poet also to have translated immotion so beautifully into words my congratulations again and keep it up
Very rightly said but needs to be elaborated, however i agree that being immotionaly intelligent is more important than being rationaly intelligent as this takes away a lot of problems out of our relationships
So simple yet so touchy, end lines
"Hamsafar nahi
par safar raha kaheen"
explain a lot simple words deep meaning
i like that
rimu
Dost ki Dua, khuda ki Panaah
Thanx simmu
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